I write to bring me closer
To the happiness
That always gets stolen for me
But sometimes I wonder
If it only drags me deeper
But I can't help
But write these words
That flow from me and onto the page
These blasted words
The damn thoughts
But it's only when
The pen runs over the paper
That the words will flow
I often wish to make them stop
But the overwelming
Silence
It's simply to much to bear
I just have to break
The barrier
Holding back my words
And every last ounce of creativity
That when I write
Pulses through my vains
The ache of emptiness
Is gone
And I can hear the words
Screaming at me
write me
write me
WRITE ME
And I have to
I can't not run the pen
Across the paper
Cause thats the only way
To crush the urge
That overwelming desire
And so page after page
Is stained
With the words my mind forces my hand to write
But it is my heart that screams them
Shouting them when the pen is in hand
But when the pen drops
I must welcome the silence again














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~*~You know your in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams. -Dr. Suess~*~
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Merci, mon chéri, tu m'as fait envie de vivre à nouveau ...
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~*~You know your in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams. -Dr. Suess~*~
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Here L-chan share her cake with chu!
I be's poet [link]
Merci, mon chéri, tu m'as fait envie de vivre à nouveau ...
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~*~You know your in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams. -Dr. Suess~*~
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Here L-chan share her cake with chu!
I be's poet [link]
Merci, mon chéri, tu m'as fait envie de vivre à nouveau ...
As a bit of suggestion, about 3/4 the way through, the "write me" part for some reason just doesn't work for me, it breaks the flow of the poem in my head. and there were a few places where you dropped to the next line where you might could have kept in on one, but whatever. Stylistic stuff.
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Rip your collar from your neck...even if it tears out your spine...even if it breaks your hands...even if it kills you.
And I think i'm going to remove the "write me"'s, looking at it now, i can see how it disrupts the flow, I haven't looked it this, really, for awhile >w>
Merci pour le advice
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Here L-chan share her cake with chu!
I be's poet [link]
Merci, mon chéri, tu m'as fait envie de vivre à nouveau ...
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